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Question by Mauriciooo:
Is this any good? Or should I begin over..?
I guess you can all it a cover letter haha.. But yea is it okay? Bad? I am applying for positions as a leasing agent, auto sales agent, insurance sales, and various other sales fields. My main focus is as a leasing agent as I am exhausted of having a roomie. If all else fails I will go back to retail haha. Anyways, I have an RE license I am 20. Just let me know what u think and give me some tips. Thankss
Ps.. It looks much superior on word haha

Mauricio
Xxxx N xx St. • Scottsdale, AZ xxxxx • 480.xxx.xxxx • xxxxxxxxx@hotmail.com

August 4, 2011
Human Resource Manager:
I apologize for the impersonal greeting. I wanted to address this to the right person but was unable to obtain your name. I am very interested in your sales position.

My name is Mauricio Xxxxxxxx. The last three years I’ve held a job as a Sales Associate at two reputable clothing brand stores. However, I am now looking forward to apply my acquired skills and knowledge to your company.

On your on the web ad you said some basic stipulations for the position. I am excited to state that I comply with all of the requirements. In regards to working Monday-Fridays and some weekends, I have nothing but free time after 1p.m, because of my college attendance. However, I am absolutely free Fridays – Sundays.

Not only do I possess the qualifications you would want and rightly expect, but I also possess more qualities, for one, I am fluent in Spanish. Also, since I am a young college student I feel like I have the responsibility to prove to my employer that I am mature enough for the job and I promise I will try harder than anyone else. Furthermore, I welcome the challenge to perform multiple activities.
I am excited about the possibility of a personal interview at your earliest convenience. I would greatly appreciate the chance. Thank you!

Best Regards,

Mauricio xxxxxxxx Email xxxxxxxxxxx@hotmail.com • Cell 480.xxx.xxxx

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